Repair Your Mind! ... Scarlet Rain by JANET I. BUCK
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JANET I. BUCK
Scarlet Rain


When bombs left craters
in the streets like broken plates
with parts of people for their food.
When bodies seemed just tags clipped off
a brand new shirt still folded in a tissue prayer.
When certainty was a straw hut
lit in sorrow's rampant flame,
you told yourself among the screams,
it was, when all was said and done,
the juggernaut of a wartime waltz.

A baby was born in the back of a gutted bus
christened by the falling stars
of bullets finding target plots.
Her lace-stitched booties
seemed like veiled innocence.
Her father in a heap of blood.
An M-16 her first new toy.
Wooden slats of cradled hours,
blankets cross-stitched with her name,
nipples of a saxophone that
needed meat of music now.

Between the licks of terror's tongue
came cries of hope that
gave the wobbled table why?
a brand new set of fingerprints.
Painful joy, a scrapbook full
of could have been's
in cinders, fallen monuments.
Birth, the saddle sore of grief,
demanding love's deliverance.
A butterfly that breaks
thick seams of slimy caterpillar time,
emerging from the soot and dust
in sovereign rites of tenderness
uniting continents untied.
All we've crushed with mortar sticks
throwing wholeness on our cheeks -
gravel spray on sunlit roads -
a patch of grass around gray stone.



Here is a poem set amid the bluster and the fog of war. How does this great social upheaval become personal to me, the reader?

One word vibrates: 'Scarlett', But that word imagines the foolishness of leadership (rain/reign) by suggesting the "Scarlett Pimpernel"; 'Scarlett' alludes to Nathaniel Hawthorne's letter of injustice which also suggests adulterous and wanton behavior (as is war). We are reminded of a more recent 'Scarlet' O'Hara and her final determination in Gone with the Wind.

So, through blood (again 'scarlet') one rises to regal status ('scarlett' as the color of regal
robes). I am reminded of St.John Pearse's comment that to reach salvation one must travel the 'dark night of the soul'. Janet Buck takes us into the dark night of her soul and shows us a way to overcome the most horrific tribulations.
I love this poem for its subtlety in laying layers of text with one descriptive word. - theEditor



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RICHARD FEIN
Two Masters

Like moths we were once guided by the moon.
But unlike the ephemeral moth
our sheer longevity confers a grudging wisdom.
Each time we see Mistress moon's face
lighten, then darken, then lighten again,
a generation of moths spreads its wings, mates, and dies.

Now master sun is our metronome.
His circling shadow is sectioned into hours.
He drives us on with an allegro beat.

Mistress moon moves to an adagio of monthly cycles.
She deigns to let us study her cool, white face,
as she  watches over our nocturnal trysts.

Master sun is a strict foreman rousing everyone to work every day.
He sears the eyes of anyone sassy enough to stare at him.
A jealous emperor of the heavens,
he drowns all lesser lights in  pervasive blue.

But Mistress shares the universe with us,
letting all celestial companions shine around her.

Long ago a choice was made,
and now we are prodded forward by the hours,
by shadows passing in circles,
rather than slowly dancing under a lunar face
that gracefully veils and unveils monthly.
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Our longevity, the poet relates, gives us wisdom greater than that of beasts. Then, we may ask, why is it we are still drawn to flame?

Readers must be aware that in a poet's answers there lay questions yet unasked. So, as moths return to the moon, a poet returns us to yet another poem.

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