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GRACE CAVALIERI -

The Elevator Poems:
How to Find the Narrative Poem

This talk examines the qualities in the writing life that contribute to well being. The poem slows us down, allows enjoyment of the natural world, makes memory permanent, preserves those who are beloved in our lives and memory. This is an exploration of our lives to find subjects for the poem from the past. Samples of writing demonstrate why poetry is an enjoyable art form, and how it contributes to life's pleasure. The discussion involves the primary imagination (raw material) and the secondary imagination (selecting and shaping.)

Content:

a. Conception of a poem
b. Retrieving the experience
c. Trusting memory
d. Finding detail for the poem
e. Seeking the human voice,
            the conversational tone
f. Evaluating explicit and
            direct references to experience
g. Finding the enthusiasms
h. Understanding the source of vitality
i. Evaluating emotional fiction vs. fact
j. Overcoming the barriers of language
k. Responding to obsessive memory
l. Accepting the passion
m. Avoiding the cliched
n. Entering the mysteries of the past
o. Forming the written piece
            from an isolated incident

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GRACE CAVALIERI has authored twelve books of poetry including Cuffed Frays published by Argonne House Press. Cavalieri has also produced numerous plays, and written texts and lyrics performed for opera, stage and film. Her recent book Pinecrest Rest Haven was produced as a play in New York City (2001) - her 18th play on the American stage. Her current play, Quilting the Sun, has enjoyed a reading by its NYC cast at the Smithsonian Institution's American History Museum, 2003.

Grace teaches poetry in workshops throughout the country and is on the poetry faculty of St. Mary's College of Maryland. She is Resident poet at Castello di Montegufoni in Florence and conducts workshops there each year. She has produced and hosted The Poet and the Poem on public radio (1977-97) presenting 2,000 poets to the nation; She now broadcasts the series annually from the Library of Congress via NPR satellite. Cavalieri is the Founder of two poetry presses in Washington which are still going strong since the 1970's.

Grace has received the Pen-Fiction Award, the Allen Ginsberg poetry Award, The Corporation for Public Broadcasting Silver Medal, and awards from the National Commission on Working Women, The American Association of University Women, plus many others. She received the inaugural Columbia Merit Award from the Folger Library Poetry Committee for "significant contribution to poetry." She has enjoyed the kindness of several Writing Fellowships. Grace Cavalieri writes full-time in Annapolis where she lives with her husband, sculptor Kenneth Flynn. They have four grown daughters.

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GRACE CAVALIERI
Dates

The silver from my mother's mirror 
gleams its stories
toward a light which drops and never breaks. 
It says to tell the truth and 

permanently shining, brings forth 
an original day bright as this one 
where children and other small creatures 
played without threat

but the child's story is never without fear – is it – 
and seems to be made of remainders which either 
want for love or some relief from it. 

In the third grade the pyramids were presented to us
by Miss O'Malley
so kind that she would –
in honor of learning – 
give us the key to Egypt
if she could. 
Who would like to bring dates for all to taste?
Who can do this on the lunch hour? She asked,
Naturally I
- who could not imagine how -
said I would - 
and, like a child with enough money to spend, ran 
home with only one hour, one hour to ease
my dear mother who probably had
little money in the house, yet who bravely asked 
“Shouldn't you buy two packages for the class”
I said No.
Love and fear divided in my mind between
an ocean of children
and my mother's troubled face,
“One package is all I need” I lied, 
“Someone else will bring the rest”
(Children spend so much time persuading – 
no wonder no one believes them).
Eight dates for twenty children
which would taste so sweet -
Miss O'Malley, always kind, cut the tiny squares
and I kept interrupting, hoping they
wouldn't notice. After all
there wasn't water in the land of pyramids ... was
there … and
not too many trees
probably hungry people and small rations there as 
well. 

That day every one of us was a reflection of the other-
The children  who ate their portions,
the mother at home worrying about her daughter's gift
the child thinking about her mother's face
and Miss O'Malley who, kind and earnest, 
taught us all about a hardy people in an arid land 
who gave what they had and could give nothing more.

copyright 2003 GRACE CAVALIERI

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What can a poetry workshop do for a poet? Much depends on the workshop's leader's/facilitator's ability to create a safe space for exploration and experimentation; but, assuming we are lucky or experienced enough to choose the right leader/facilitator/self-led group, what should we expect from a workshop?

Joseph Campbell says that the poet is today's Shaman, thus endowing poetry with a spirit side as a pathway to what is above, beneath and beyond or perhaps in plain view but overlooked. And Shamans aren't born. It might be argued that they are touched by some innate magic presence, but even that is a gift which must be identified, shaped, and honed to its highest possible perfection. Workshops are a tool toward that identifying, shaping and honing. Workshops are spaces to make, learn and share pathways to soul.

Some may prefer a more mundane view of workshops. In that case, let's think of workshops as brainstorming sessions. Epic poetry passed down from ages ago has been sharpened and faceted by an oral history of telling and retelling where what didn't work before the audience was dropped or amended and where what worked sang into the hearts of listeners. Workshops are spaces with a ready made audience helping the poet's work to sing for now and future generations.

Workshops are the community poets need to spur us on or the room we need to finally focus on what wants to be birthed rather than phones and meals and clocks and dirty corners that want dusting. Workshops are the high without the drugs, the journey without leaving home, the enticement to write it down, now, the practice space to breathe out the words and see how they sound. My own poetry has been created and polished and encouraged by special people in specially chosen workshops both in person and on line. To all of my teachers and to all of my fellow travelers, a toast: Let the workshop begin!

- TAMMY VITALE

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TAMMY VITALE is a poet/painter/sculptor who does issue-based organizing in her community. She is also, among other things, a grandmother/mother/daughter and a lover/partner/wife. Others have called her trouble-maker/catalyst/lynchpin. She likes the title of Renaissance Woman. Tammy has an undergraduate degree in Business Administration from Trinity College, an M.A. in Story and Social Change from Goddard and a Ph.D. in life experience. Her passion is making a safe place for women in this world to discover themselves because it helps her discover herself. She uses all of her art and work to create a roadmap for herself to see where she's been, and she shares it with others to see how they get where they're going. She believes in the web of life: everything is connected; anything is possible.

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TAMMY VITALE
Convert

Once her prayers beat the sky
with the fear of a caged bird
cold beads slipping through fingers
like memories. She has forgotten
why the woman in blue
is forever stepping on the snake.

Instead she thinks of the green serpents
seen unexpectedly the year she thought
of drowning, how water enfolds and covers

but the serpents sang to her
of the secrets of dry grass
the diligence of trees
and the warmth of small feathered things
with racing hearts
so she learned to love the land.

Now
she places sweet milk
in the corners of her yellow kitchen
just in case
the serpents come ashore
makes nests of shredded paper
for broken birds with wounded wings
and skitters glass beads
one by one
across the worn and shiny floor
while she holds her prayers
in the palm of her hand.
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