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GIL SAENZ
Rainbow Heaven
Orange moon, purple sky, See the dreams, the wishes floating by. Pretty colors, pretty lights, Make those dreams so very nice. Orange moon, purple sky, Makes one feel like asking why. Many days, many years Filled with happiness and good cheer. Orange moon, purple sky, Our revernce for life you intensify. People stop, people stare, Full of wonder at nature's grand affair. Orange moon, purple sky, The angels are singing a lullaby. Many hearts, many lives, Have enjoyed this rainbow Fantasy paradise.


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DANIEL GALLIK
Bars Are Needed In North America
She came over the house last night and ate a peach. I used the lav after I washed my hands. Next door, the lady who has been going with a fireman for one hundred and one fires in this small township in rural Ohio, asked her lover to taste her lentil soup. My oldest kid, Louise, ate an entire lake in Canada. My uncle forgot to charge a man for towing his truck after he witnessed the man try to start it with a rope. Taxes. A wife looks purty after two Golden Anniversaries. A husband looks handsome after he says, "Yes, you can shit too, if you eat regular. Work. I asked my wife if she wanted to wash the kitchen floor sometime in the new millennium, and she says "Yes, one of these years." God. Damn.

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Top 10 Common English Goofs by Web Authors
KEMPTON SMITH
In reviewing and browsing web sites over the years, I have compiled a list of the most common misuses of English by web authors. Here they are in Letterman (reverse) order. 10. Who, which or that? "Who" (or "whom") refers to persons. "Which" refers to animals or things, never to persons. "That" can refer to either persons or things. Examples:      The girl who was hungry.      The dog that wagged its tail.      The software which I wrote. 9. Anyone vs any one "Anyone" means "any person," not necessarily any specific person. It could refer to multiple people simultaneously. As two words, "any one" refers to a single person. Examples:      Anyone can download my software.      But used only by any one user at a time. 8. Commonly misspelled words All right, Dependable, Independent, Recommend, Responsible, Separate JH-a key to success here is to proofread after running spell check. Sound- alike words and right spelling/wrong word are caught by proofreading. 7. Don't put punctuation at the end of a URL While not technically an English grammatical error, don't put a period or anything immediately after a URL reference. Doing so will usually invalidate the URL. You might call this an internet grammatical rule. Example:      Notice the lack of a period in the following sentence.      My URL is http://article-promotion.blogspot.com JH-another way to accomplish this is by setting the actual URL off with brackets example:      PoetryRepairShop ( http://www.poetryrepairs.com ) is a site for poetry. PLEASE NOTE place blank spaces before and after the ( and ). 6. Software not softwares "Software" can be singular or plural. Never use "softwares." 5. Do the quotes go after or before the period? Put quotes after a period or comma. Put quotes before a colon. Put quotes after a question mark unless the entire sentence is a question. This is a US English standard. British English usage can differ. Examples:      He asked, "Are you hungry?"      She replied, "Yes, I am hungry."      Did she say, "Yes"? 4. There, their, or they're "There" is used in two ways. It can specify a place. It can also be used as an expletive or empty word to start a sentence. "Their" is used as a possessive form of "they". "They're" is short for "they are." Examples:      I live there, not here.      There are nine planets in the solar system.      The two boys raced their bikes.      They're both tired after walking up the stairs. 3. Powerful Too many developers describe their software as, "XXX Software is a powerful, easy-to-use, ... ." I searched download.com and found 2149 descriptions or titles of software containing the word "powerful." Powerful has many meanings, most referring to how effectively something is performed, as in muscular. A car with 450 horsepower is clearly more powerful than one with only 200 horsepower. But what is powerful software? If you mean feature-rich (like Adobe Photoshop), then say so. If your software does only one thing, but it does it completely or thoroughly (like CounterSpy), then say so. But please, no more powerful software. 2. Site or sight A "site" is a place. "Sight" refers to your sense of vision. Examples:      A web site is a place on the internet      that you visit with your browser.      A beautiful sunset is a marvellous sight. JH-see my comment at #8, above And, finally, the most common English blunder by web authors is: 1. Its or It's Use "it's" only when it means "it is." Unless you can replace "it's" with "it is," use "its." Never use "its'." JH- IT IS as a contraction (one sound but two words in some English coccurances is 'Tis ('Tis the season to be jolly') But American English delete the second to last letter as in don't (do not) Examples:      It's raining today.      The dog wagged its tail. Conclusion: English is very difficult for persons whose native language is not English. It is also difficult for many English-speaking authors. Unfortunately, most of the common grammatical errors will not be caught by a spell checker, so you have to manually check your writing for them. An excellent reference is the short and timeless book, The Elements of Style, by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White. A free online version of this book is available ( http://www.bartleby.com/141/index.html ). I hope that web authors can use this article to recognize and correct some of the most common grammatical blunders ffound on the internet.

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