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GABOR GYUKICS
The Snake is Back
Crestfallen serpent carries her poison
wrenching, lingering around a fair church
stealing priests dream
The priests are carelessly holding
white gloves and umbrellas
their bare feet flash as they prowl
not thinking while crossing over
to curiously stare at lately acquired pictures
of locals who would never return
to pursue their faith, to persuade each other for
a simple substance which hasn't remained here
only vague attacks
abrupt faints and
peremptory sacrifices
no rain has fallen
no cold air arrived
the snake empties her poison
in the holy water with
paradise calmness
through doors, windows
she returns and coils up
on her highchair
she is the doctor of
nonsensical illusions
guarding the antidote
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the snake in Hungarian poet
GABOR GYUKICS' poem depends for understanding upon unmentioned literature. It is of course the tale of Adam and Eve in Eden, and the serpent is the evil one whose whispers lead to transgressions that lead out of paradise. The unspoken that lay behind a poem is the flaw in 'reader response' criticism. Without the 'understory' a reader knows only one level: this is a poem about a serpent. But GYUKICS' snake is as dangerous to us ('through doors, windows/she returns') as it was in Adam and Eve's narrative. The serpent is also a part of the reader's narrative.
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