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BOB BRADSHAW
Helen Keller 			
Anne stretched my hand out beneath the pump. The water kept dripping as if the spout was a clerk dropping change into my palm. While the water leaped out of my hand like spilling nickels Anne "wrote" in my other palm. I had never known why Anne tickled my palm. But suddenly Anne's "writing" leaped from one palm to the other, the way a flame can jump across tapers. My right hand "understood" the left palm as if they were brothers exchanging winks. It was as if an empty sky had burst into rain over a parched earth. No, you cannot grasp what I'm saying. It was like stumbling into a jungle's clearing. No that's not it. Anne had spelled "w-a-t-e-r" in my palm.

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JUST ANOHTER ADOLESCENT BRAGGART by Mark Gaudet (reviewed)
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Just Another Adolescent Braggart is Mark Gaudet (reviewed)’s first print poetry collection. He is 36 and started actively submitting work to small press publications about a year ago. He has a degree in fine art, but no formal training in writing. In his bio he notes his major influences to be Charles Bukowski and William Carlos Williams. His poems are word light and earth bound. I was curious about his use of light-up words such as fuck, sex, cigarettes, booze, blow job, vomit. He told me, “I try not to use a lot of symbolism; usually what you see is what you get. I like it simple, to the point. I want my poetry to stand up, grab a hold of someone and slap them across the face. I like it hard and with an edge, but I also like to mix in some humor.” He went on to tell me, “But my first love is Bukowski. He told it like it was. For some reason his words hold my attention. I'm not reading something and saying to myself what does that mean? Or trying to understand the hidden meaning behind him screwing some woman while watching cockroaches scattering across the floor.”

I asked Gaudet if he could determine a writer’s age by their writing style or themes. I wondered if there was such a thing as young poetry and old poetry. Here is what he told me, “Its hard sometimes; I don't try to make judgments on someone's age. Hell there are kids in High School who write wonderful poetry, and people who've been writing poetry for 40 years, and their stuff is just plain shit. At least that's my opinion. Poetry's a funny thing you could write something half assed in the bathroom stall, and someone can think it's the next Jack Kerouac.” Maybe so, but good or bad writing does not seem to be a function of age. Here is an example of Gaudet’s writing a poem entitled, “Replacement”: “We met / I found another / cute, naďve, innocent // happy? // Let me peel / her face back / probing through / bone / tissue / bloody pulp // Are you hiding in her?” And here is another example, “Killing Degas”: “Paint / on my pallet // Pretty / yellows / cyan /burnt / sienna // Mash together / biting the brush / not knowing / waiting // Horses over steeple chase / pretty ballerinas glide / across / his paintings // Bourbon and pills / hues / of vomit / green / and yellow / spew / across my / canvas // Voluptuous / women / bathing / in a tub // Slit / wrists / grasp / the shower tiles // French / Impressionist / American / Depressionist “

Gaudet writes in a non-narrative, impressionistic style that is more difficult to master. Some of the poems work and some nearly do. His best work are those poems that don’t push so hard and where he backs off the adverbs and elevator words, allowing his curious world to unfold before us – just as it is. All in all, a solid first book of poetry.

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Whistler In His Old Age by BOB BRADSHAW
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Whistler In His Old Age			
He never lost his hatred for critics. Old, he wore his monocle when seated across from one. He would study him like a jeweler through his lens, then ignore him as if he were an imitation. But dinner invitations were fewer. Disciples, too, were fewer. He wanted followers with uneasy stomachs. But he would bully them for having the original brushwork of apprentice house painters. Alone, and with a bum heart, he moved in with his sister-in-law. She knew nothing. And no one dropped by to argue. Each day was dull. He felt, he said, like a great lawyer cross-examining a mirror. Work was all he had inherited from his youth. The few awards he now received were pocket change against the debt of bitterness long accrued.

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