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Life is too short for small talk by VALERY OISTEANU



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VALERY OISTEANU
Life is too short for small talk			
for Larry Rivers
Blow, blow, blow, let it flow Good feelings for all to get low Flow, flow, flow Let it flow! Let it go! Lover's unfinished love on the unfinished canvas That¹s how you will be remembered In my poem dedicated to your memory Not totally edited, but in progress Unfinished notes played on the saxophone For Kaufman, for Ginsberg, for Corso Born in the Bronx as Yitzroch Grossberg Jamming at Julliard with Miles Davis The road takes you over The mind expanded landscape Experiments into the land of Beats To Nigeria and Asia To half Hell, to full Hell and back Painting portraits, playing sax, chasing ghosts Making movies, purgatory partying Getting married, bringing up daughters, All in a life¹s, wasteland In a life of a beat Larry was reading a poem about Frank O'Hara Across the street at St. Marks Church Last words were fading And suddenly he was gone, gone! Neighbor for almost 3 decades At a party at his loft on 13th street Next to the unfinished paintings My brain was trying to fill in the blanks. The end of Bohemia in East Village The ghost of Larry Rivers, Playing jazz at the sunset Left too early, from unfinished act Unfinished conversation and Unfinished feeling in my heart

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Proofreading Correctly - Part I by DON DEWSNAP



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DON DEWSNAP Proofreading Correctly - Part I Having trained hundreds of proofreaders, I can assure you that proofreading correctly is not easy. Granted, I was training to an extremely high standard, but these were pre- qualified trainees, and only three or four ever attained to full expertise. On the bright side, proofreading correctly does not have to be difficult. You can be competent, and increase your competence, without becoming a professional top-drawer proofreader. As with any other skill, proofreading takes study and practice and intention. Of these requirements, intention is the most important. No matter why or what you are proofreading, you had better be doing it willingly, and with the intention to do it correctly, or you will not succeed. No one can force you to proofread well; you have to want to. Since you are reading this article, we can assume you want to proofread correctly. The major hurdle is surmounted. So how do you go about it? Step One: ASSUME THERE ARE ERRORS Errors are sneaky. They hide in obvious places, where you would never think to look for them. Or they group themselves, so you find one and your guard goes down for a line or two. Sometimes they disguise themselves, so they look perfectly honest and aboveboard, until you look more closely. The battle against errors is not a metaphor. They are fighting for survival, and you are fighting to eradicate them from the face of the earth. And they have the advantage of numbers. You might respect the writer highly and make the mistake of thinking he (or she, but I will use “he” to mean either) is so capable that he would almost never make an error. You may even be right. When you proof- read his work, though, you had better approach it with the certainty deep down in your gut that an error lurks within. Then when you have found that error, and you will, you have to maintain your certainty that there is another error waiting. How long do you keep this up? Until you run out of time, or have proofread the piece twice or even three times without finding an error. (It is pointless to proofread something more than once unless you can keep that certainty in your mind that there is an error trying to escape detection, so keep that viewpoint every time you read it.) Step Two: DOUBLE-CHECK The mind has a mind of its own, sometimes. You may be trying your best to direct it to what you are doing, yet a stray thought will pop in. Maybe something you are reading will make you think of something else, even if only for a second. A loud noise or someone calling you may distract you. Don’t you know it, an error was just waiting for that moment to slide itself in while your attention was elsewhere. They really are sneaky little devils. The other danger is boredom rising either from monotony or disinterest. Long lists of numbers, for instance, can become very tiresome to proofread. A technical manual on how to shuffle paper from office to office can be so dry you have to sneeze. The mind can begin to wander without your even knowing it at first. The successful approach to proofreading correctly is to double-check yourself, AS YOU READ. In effect, read everything twice. No, it doesn’t take twice as long to do this. In fact, it will end up saving time, because of the number of errors you will find this way. This does not seem logical, I know, but you will find it is true. Numbers are especially likely to contain errors. You will not be amiss to triple-check numbers. You might be remiss if you don’t. Step Three: USE A DICTIONARY If your attention snags on a word, look it up. I have a very large vocabulary and excellent spelling skills, and still use a dictionary more than most people. Feel free to use other resources as well: an atlas, the telephone book, a Zip Code book, the Internet, and even the telephone. When I saw a town spelled two different ways, I called the town clerk to get the actual spelling. Do NOT assume the author of whatever you are proofreading has checked the spelling of every proper noun. As for scientific or technical material, you had better assume the opposite. Do you know if “thiotimoline” is spelled correctly? Chances are the author isn’t positive either. Step Four: CHECK FOR CONSISTENCY I’ll get into this more deeply in Part II of this article, but briefly, make sure the spacing is consistent between lines, words, sentences, bullets and text, and paragraphs. Check that capitalization and punctuation are consistent. If the piece is formatted for printing, make sure the type sizes and fonts are correct. Inconsistencies can lead to confusion and disdain. (I told you errors are sneaky!) Part of this step is TAKE NOTES. If you are proofreading a long piece, how can you expect to remember if a name was spelled the same way on page three as on page thirty-seven? Yes, a professional, top-notch proofreader will, but it is not a normal expectation. Make notes of which words are capitalized if they are not obvious; which foreign words are italicized; anything that is out of the ordinary. Maybe you will never need most of the notes, but better to have them and not need them than the opposite. Step Five: TAKE YOUR TIME As with any other skill, proofreading speed comes with practice. Concentrate on accuracy and excellence, and speed will come. Concentrate on speed, and excellence will never arrive. I understand the pressures of work and the demands on your time. But there is a time-worn question in the printing industry: Why is there never enough time to do it right, but always enough time to do it over? One of the best proofreaders I ever trained was slow, slow, slow, but she never missed anything. You don’t have to go to that extreme, but do make sure your pace is comfortable. If you are not confident in your proofreading, you are going too fast. SUMMARY Based on experience, only a small percentage of people are cut out to be professional proofreaders, probably one to two percent. Of these, only another small percent will master the skill. However, also based on experience, almost everyone can improve his proofreading skills, and a fairly high percentage can become downright competent if they want to. While at the highest level proofreading is an art, like any art there are many mechanical skills to learn on the way to mastery. One can be a competent painter or musician to great effect. So can one be a competent proofreader. The painter smears an occasional detail, the musician misses an occasional note, and the proofreader misses an occasional typo. None of them like it, and they all strive to improve, but it doesn’t mean they are not competent. If you are going to proofread, you might as well proofread correctly. Part II of this article to learn more about how.

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Jackie Curtis by VALERY OISTEANU



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Jackie Curtis			
(His real name was John)
Lived on speed, wrote surreal poetry Youth fading fast between the night and heroin Baroque doors all lead to La Mama Theater James Dean reads poetry at Danceteria-club Fast write a movie, at Andy¹s Factory Remember the dialogues, the moves Dress up and play. Movie-Sets- lights, drugs and Andy and Paul :Action! Women in Revolt! Candy Darling, Holly Woodlawn, Jackie Curtis Names of Underground film history Paul Morrissey directing Chaos and Eros Get drunk as a skunk at Sluggers Ann His grandmother¹s perdition den Get totally stoned at Max¹s Kansas City Where turned stockings are elegantly fitting Turned dress, turned fishnets Sex-glamorista superstar In a housedress camouflage Trying to break the bourgeois morals Moaning a song through the eternal darkness High heel shoes on the night table Fetishism mania, disgraced poet-mimosa Goddess like -submissiveness Jackie is dancing on razor blades Margot Howard, Jackie Curtis, Jack Smith The parade of the experimental fools Jackie posing with his ANDY tattoo Lived on speed, died on heroin Life is just too small for this giant soul

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