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Chronicles of Vacancy			
According to this sour display of empty beer bottles rolling a shiny linoleum floor -- the skinny tree out front with few leaves and no birds -- this whale of a dream was a stillborn mistake. I wonder if you're sleeping or dead; my housewarming gift tastes like salt in a wound I wrote.   It all began as massive plows leveled the buckling barn where chickens and mice and stray cats all bickered in rhyme. We placed you in suburbia with gleaming Formica and a spotless hearth run by gas igniting artificial logs -- made the garage door yawn and close by remote control. You smiled in thanks, poured erasers of a drink.   This plot of land we meant to be nirvana for a working man is missing the out-and-out sweep of an eagle's dive, the complex dictionary of earth. Your eyes are both clamped shut in a vague malaise that bank accounts won't touch. Fancy closets with shoe racks and drawers, an atrium and no white glimpse of the moon. Your snow boots caked with wish -- nowhere pertinent to go.

©2006 JANET BUCK

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Writing for the Web by ADAM McFARLAND

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Writing for the Web


Have you ever tried to read your local newspaper online? 
How about the New York Times or the Wall Street Journal? 
It just isn't the same. 
	
Do you know why? Because articles meant for print don't 
translate well to the web, and the rules that apply to writing
content for the internet are different than those for print. What 
constitutes quality content offline does not necessarily constitute 
quality content online.
 
How the web is different 
Text is hard to read 

Typical computer monitors have a resolution of 96 dpi 
(dots per inch). Compare that with a printout from a laser 
printer that has a resolution of 600 dpi, or a magazine 
page that can be upwards of 2400 dpi, and it's not hard 
to figure out why the text on a computer places a strain on 
the eyes. According to the book Hot Text – Web 
Writing That Works, by Jonathan and Lisa Price, 
“because text is more difficult to read on-screen, people 
often read slower, comprehend less, recall less, and do 
less in response.” 

Words can be linked to other pages and sources 

The closest thing you're going to get to a link in a newspaper 
is when a story is split into two sections and you're told the 
story is continued on page 9. But when it comes to the web, 
words and images can be linked to other web pages, photos, 
videos, sounds, and a myriad of other things. Being able to 
link is the primary tool that web writers can take advantage 
of that print writers don't have at their disposal. 

How you should write 
Write less 

Because of the strain placed on readers when reading on 
a computer screen, you can't expect them to read a 5,000 
word article. Research has shown that most readers tend 
to scan an article before reading.Articles longer than 1,000 
words will likely turn off your audience and result in few 
people reading your article (and therefore fewer visitors
coming back to your site in the future). You should 
condense your writing to include only the most crucial 
points and eliminate everything else. Writing successfully 
for the web forces you to present only the necessary 
content and leave the rest out. 

Utilize headings and lists 

Since people tend to scan web articles as opposed to
reading them from the first word to the final word, you 
should make it easy for them to find what they're looking 
for by using headings, bold type, and lists. A great way 
to turn a print article into a readable web article is to 
transform it into a top 10 list. Lists make it easy for
readers to scan and read only in what they have interest. 

Use plenty of links and make them obvious 

Since linking is the primary advantage of a web writer, it 
should be used early and often. Linking allows you to 
provide the reader with a roadmap of information. With 
your article as a starting point, your reader should be able 
to find more information about any and all topics discussed 
in the article. Common things to link to include reference 
pages, news sources, audio and video, forums, and 
applications that will enhance the reading experience. 
The best thing about links is that the user can choose 
which ones to follow and which ones to ignore. That 
allows you to reference something without citing the 
entire thing as you would have to in a print article. 

One of the most important things to remember when 
linking is to make it visually obvious that a section of 
text is a link. Five years ago it was common place to 
use the standard blue underlined text for linking, but 
as the web has evolved, most designers have abandoned 
that style for better looking links. Site designers can 
still make links obvious by consistently using a different 
color than standard text and by providing a hover effect, 
such as underlining the link and changing it's color, when 
users place their cursor over the link. This subconsciously 
tells them that the text is a link. 

Write with the search engines in mind 

Since much of the content on the web is found via search, 
it makes sense to write with the search engines in mind. No,
 this doesn't mean that you should stuff your articles with 
keywords to the point where they are barely readable. 
But it does mean that you should write titles and headings 
that actually convey what your article discusses. For example, 
this article could be called “Content Evolution” or “Digital 
Distribution.” If it were a magazine article, those titles or 
other titles might have been more appealing, but they don't 
capture the essence of the article, which is “Writing for the 
Web.” If someone were to search for an article on writing 
online, they'd likely use a phrase like “how to write for the 
web” or “writing practices for the web” which would turn 
up this article, but probably wouldn't turn up an article with 
one of those other titles. 

Price, Jonathan, and Lisa Price. Hot Text - Web 
Writing That Works. Indiana: New Riders, 2002. 			

©2006 ADAM McFARLAND

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The Dwelling			
well-intentioned but misguided addition looked like a homemade shed leaning north suggesting pressure-treated posts had not sunk below the frost line the new addition shifted during winter shingles were not aligned window boxes were different sizes the stone garden fountain was dry the herringbone pattern of an outdoor bench slumping brick barbecue chaos a long dog pen a torqued and drooping chain link near the woods a blanket-back dog perchedatop of a barrel bawling a curtain in the window moved immediately a woman emerged heavy-set baldingsmall eyes a smiley face perhaps her husband had walked out or come back

©2006 ROBERT CRAIG

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