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MICHAEL D COFFEY
'Quiet, early one morning'			
Quiet, early one morning the dust of time Caught between earth and heaven In a breath of golden thoughts Betwixt the moon and sun in burning dreams Fire and fortune mixed in a moment Here I paused frozen in a frame of time Quiet, in the early days dreaming of passion Of lust and life and moments in a heavenly place Sheets and flesh and crescendos Screeching violins and trombones Blasting my senses in the vibrant play And on into living and laughing Playing the night and meeting the dawn Booze and Beatles, braving the darkness Dancing and dreaming Caught in the dusky incensed room Quiet, on the shore, cold sand And whispering waters, creeping up Kissing the gray dawn's luster The sun breaking the dream To reveal a hope, a wish, a future Quiet, broken by the day's blustery entrance Traffic and travel Jetstreams and gulfstreams Living the jetset way Among five star hotels and far-flung islands The drowning, the dull throb Of endless weary replays Lost in the game of meaningless scenes Replayed, revised, revisited Lies and promises made, to be broken To return again to the quiet times, the wishing for A walk on a silent moon sung promenade Of virgin sand and dewy kisses A place of peace and honest fellowship Quiet, early one morning ... again

©2006 MICHAEL D COFFEY

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How To Be Your Own Editor by MATTHEW W. GRANT
MATTHEW W. GRANT
is a writer and consultant who founded A+ Editors, an online writing and editing service. For more information, please visit A+ Editors

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How To Be Your Own Editor 		

There is a stigma associated with writers turning to editors for assistance 
with their work. 
	
Some people see outside editing as an unfair advantage, a form of literary 
cheating. Writers are expected to be able to objectively evaluate their own 
work. Interestingly, this is exactly the opposite of what one finds in other 
professions. Witness the famous phrase, " A doctor who treats himself has 
a fool for a patient." Let's not forget, " A lawyer who represents herself 
has a fool for a client." Writers are treated differently from other 
professionals, though. Writers are somehow expected to turn in perfect 
drafts of novels, articles, work reports, and term papers. Their work must 
be edited before it is turned in. Anything less is considered unprofessional 
and unacceptable. 

Here's the twist in this story. Best-selling authors, magazine writers, and 
newspaper columnists all have editors! That's right, perfection is only 
required ahead of time from students, business people, and unknown 
writers. Those who have "arrived" suddenly benefit from editorial guidance 
and second opinions on their work before it reaches its final audience. 

What's wrong with this picture? What's a writer who is still in school or 
hasn't yet been published to do? One option is to ignore the naysayers. 
Go right ahead and get help on writing projects before they are submitted. 
Ask a friend or a relative who has a firm grasp of grammar and writes well 
if he or she will edit or at least proofread your work. If nobody in your 
immediate social circle qualifies, there are many people and companies 
offering proofreading and editing services. If time and budget allow, take 
advantage of them. 

What about when circumstances force a writer to tough it out alone before
turning in the work? If you're forced to take written matters into your own 
hands, here are the things to look for while acting as your own editor.
 
· Spelling – Run spell check, but don't rely on it exclusively. 

Look up words if you are unsure about them, even if the software approves 
them. Never think, "That's close enough," or "They won't notice," or "A few 
spelling mistakes are acceptable." If you've been the victim of an 
educational class or system that told you that spelling doesn't count, then 
whoever told you that has done you a disservice. Spelling counts! 

· Grammar – Many people advise that you make sure what you write matches 
the way you speak. 

That works if you speak correctly all the time. If not, you can easily review 
grammar lessons online at no cost if you need a refresher. 

· Punctuation – Make sure all the apostrophes and quotes are necessary. 

Double check to make sure you ended interrogative questions with 
question marks. It's easy to just type a period at the end of all the 
sentences out of habit. · Typos – Blame the gremlin that hides in your 
keyboard if you want to, but fix them anyway. Even though people 
will probably know what you meant to type, don't make them guess. 

· Clarity – When a writer knows what he is saying, he may overlook other 
possible interpretations. 

'The mother checked on the baby while she was crying.' Who was crying 
in that sentence? It could be either one of them. 'All the tabloids had 
to say that the Hollywood couple filed for divorce.' Does that mean that 
there were multiple tabloids and each and every one reported the same 
story or does that mean that there were no other details available and 
the tabloids simply had only that one fact to report? 

· Consistency – Verify. Verify. Verify.

Whenever there are two or more acceptable forms of the same word, the 
same form should be used every time throughout the piece. Examples to 
watch for are TV/television and USA/U.S.A/US of A. 

· Organization – Make sure your thoughts flow logically and each idea 
builds upon the one before it. 

You can't make your point if nobody can find it! 

· Word usage – All forms of communication should fit their audiences. 

The way a person expresses herself at a Super Bowl party should be 
different than in a formal written report to her boss. 

Scanning your work projects or term papers for these different areas 
will not only improve the particular assignment on which you're 
working, the process sets your brain on the right path for future 
writing projects as well. Maybe your readers will be saying, 'A writer 
who has himself for an editor just may be on to something.'

©2006 MATTHEW W. GRANT

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Salty Memories by MICHAEL D COFFEY
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Salty Memories			
Do you remember ...   Do you remember the day when the wind Whispering its fantasy of sweetness Kissed your hair And caressed your face?   Do you remember that day, that play Of life lived in a roller coaster of embraces Of deep revelry and softness When I held you?   Do you remember that time, that passion That lust for life, that aching deepness When we loved, and lay Before the glowing embers The wine, the delicious taste Of love?   Do you remember how we lost ourselves In a weekend of silent looks, books Of windswept moments And the taste of the salty sea air?   Do you remember Can you forget How it was that time Those sweet bitter days Of love and lust That longing, that thirst That craving for completeness Together in one?   Do you remember, do you remember That echoing dream The night, the day, the night The breathless cavorting The satisfaction, the completeness Do you remember?   Do you remember, it echoes in my thoughts That memory, that endless time Love lost in a frozen moment Reality fixed in a dream Do you remember like I do?   Do you remember?

©2006 MICHAEL D COFFEY

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