"I had many things to write, but I will not with ink and pen write unto thee..."
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LYN LIFSHIN Haven't You, Haven't You
even if you've no interest in another man suddenly noticed in one week, three or four who aren't bad on TV? Between hours at my desk, or ballet, I'm not likely to find many hunks but when it's been straight rain 17 days, haven't you started dreaming of a walk under cherry petals with someone new? Someone who wouldn't yell at you or put his hands over his ears when you as a question? Shit, I'm not easily hurt, not easily lured but when each morning is a minefield and I field I ought to tape my mouth with adhesive, say no thing that might lead to some fight. I want the murky days over, this gray darken- ing to pewter to go and I'm making a list of those, at least in dreams who might help me get out of this

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GRANT is a writer and consultant who founded A+ Editors, an online writing and editing service.



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How to Be Your Own Editor

There is a stigma associated with writers turning to editors for assistance with their work.

Some people see outside editing as an unfair advantage, a form of literary cheating. Writers are expected to be able to objectively evaluate their own work.

Interestingly, this is exactly the opposite of what one finds in other professions. Witness the famous phrase, " A doctor who treats himself has a fool for a patient." Let's not forget": or, "A lawyer who represents herself has a fool for a client." Writers are treated differently from these other professionals. Writers are somehow expected to turn in perfect drafts of poetry, novels, articles, work reports, and term papers without turning to an editor (Anything other is considered unprofessional and unacceptable).

Here's the twist in this story. Best-selling authors, magazine writers, and newspaper columnists all have editors! That's right, perfection is only required ahead of time from students, business people, and unknown writers. Those who have "arrived" suddenly benefit from editorial guidance and second opinions on their work before it reaches its final audience.

What's wrong with this picture? What's a writer who is still in school or hasn't yet been published to do? One option is to ignore the naysayers. Go right ahead and get help on writing projects before they are submitted. Ask a friend or a relative who has a firm grasp of grammar and writes well if he or she will edit or at least proofread your work. If nobody in your immediate social circle qualifies, there are many people and companies offering proofreading and editing services. If time and budget allow, take advantage of them.

What about when circumstances force a writer to tough it out alone before turning in the work? If you're forced to take written matters into your own hands, here are the things to look for while acting as your own editor.

Spelling – Run spell check, but don't rely on it exclusively. Look up words if you are unsure about them, even if the software approves them. Never think, "That's close enough," or "They won't notice," or "A few spelling mistakes are acceptable." If you've been the victim of an educational class or system that told you that spelling doesn't count, then whoever told you that has done you a disservice. Spelling counts!

Grammar – Many people advise that you make sure what you write matches the way you speak. That will work if you speak correctly all the time. If not, you can easily review grammar lessons online at no cost if you need a refresher. (This is especially true for poets who wish to be recognized internationally - poetry readers in Botswana, for example, won't necessarily tune into the latest U.S. street phrases - PRSeditor).

Punctuation – Make sure you put in all the apostrophes and quotes necessary. Double check to make sure you ended interrogative questions with question marks. It's easy to just type a period at the end of all the sentences out of habit.

Typos – Blame the gremlin that hides in your keyboard if you want to, but fix them anyway. Even though people will probably know what you meant to type, don't make them guess.

Clarity – When a writer knows what he is saying, he sometimes overlooks other possible interpretations. "The mother checked on the baby while she was crying." Who was crying in that sentence? It could be either one of them. "All the tabloids had to say that the Hollywood couple filed for divorce." Does that mean that there were multiple tabloids and each and every one reported the same story or does that mean that there were no other details available and the tabloids simply had only that one fact to report?

Consistency – Verify that whenever there are two or more acceptable forms of the same word, the same form should be used every time throughout the piece. Examples to watch for are TV/television and USA/U.S.A/US of A.

Organization – Make sure your thoughts flow logically and each idea builds upon the one before it. You can't make your point if nobody can find it!

Word usage – All forms of communication should fit their audiences. The way a person expresses herself at a Super Bowl party should be different than in a formal written report to her boss.

Scanning your work for these different areas will not only improve the particular item on which you are working, the process sets your brain on the right path for future writing projects as well. Maybe your readers will be saying, "A writer who has himself for an editor just may be on to something."

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Continuity			
The world changed last night. Summer green rainbowed into scarlet and gold. Grass blades dulled under a thin coat of frost. Tomorrow's wind divorces leaves and trees, sets them free. The sky dyed purple as the Gods opened their robes, set loose The Horsemen to ride Halloween winds. My mind is the Sahara. Neurons fire sand. Dust spouts through dehydrated lips. Joints jerk forward in Post-CVA fashion, frozen. Tears are gone. My chest no longer convulses with screams I won't let escape. Rationality replaces snow-globe illusions. The world changed last night. Still I am a shadow on the wall.

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