"I had many things to write, but I will not with ink and pen write unto thee..."
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JANE HUTTO
When the Cricket Sings			

As long as the cricket sings, 
His companions merry in their 
Palaces of grass, I do not rue
The passing of spring, or summer's 
Waning days. My eyes search for 
Frost and icy window panes-- 
For crimson leaves tacked carelessly 
On branches bare against autumn's 
Bluest sky. Sing on, my friend, 
Sing on while ears can hear and 
Eyes resist the dimming of the day. 
			

©2007 JANE HUTTO

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LAURIE DART
Five Ways to Improve Your Writing 
and Strengthen Your Online Presence

Writing is more than just taking a pen to paper or tapping away on the 
keyboard. A good writer has a working knowledge of basic grammar, 
spelling, pronunciation, and vocabulary. You may be thinking you 
could never be a writer because your grammar and spelling skills are 
terrible. That’s simply not true. You can improve your grammar, your 
spelling, your vocabulary and ultimately your writing. Dedication 
and hard work, makes it possible. Start with these five tips. 

1. Less is more with so many things in life, writing is no exception. 
Keep your writing concise. Say what you mean. Don’t go on and 
on and on. Your readers will get lost and become confused and 
eventually give up. Audiences appreciate writers who get to the 
point. 

2. Don’t add a bunch of flowery words. You may think they make 
you sound interesting or more intelligent, but again, you run the 
risk of confusing your readers and eventually losing them. Anything 
you write should be clear. 

3. Keep your use of “that” to a minimum. Many of us use “that” when 
we write and it is as irritating as listening to someone say “uh’ or “like” 
when they talk. When you’re finished writing, do a search for “that” 
and see how many you can delete. You’ll be amazed at the difference 
just this one tip will make in your writing. 

4. Make sure you use the correct words. If you have any question 
as to whether you should use compliment or complement or except 
or accept – make sure to look it up! A few seconds of research could 
save you from an error that lives forever in print. We’ve all seen it. 
Nothing kills your credibility faster. 

5. Proofread, proofread, and proofread. Then, when you finish, 
proofread some more. Don’t rely on spell check and make sure 
to have someone else read your piece. When you check for 
spelling errors – read the piece backwards. It forces you to look 
at each word and it’s harder for the brain to compensate and 
hide the errors. 

Oh, and one last thing – spacing! I learned in high school to 
put two spaces after the punctuation at the end of a sentence. 
Of course I also learned to type on a manual typewriter! I’ve 
since had to break that habit because the only reason  that two 
spaces were used after a period during the 'typewriter' age was 
because original typewriters had monospaced fonts -- the extra 
space was needed for the eye to pick up on the beginning of a 
new sentence. That’s not necessary on the computer as software 
expands or contracts depending upon the available space. So 
get in the habit of using one space. It looks much professional. 

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WARD KELLEY
We Have This Tendency

I did not do anything wrong . . .
did not sin, did not fornicate,
I cannot think of why this terrible
fate has befallen me.

I was born . . . is that it?
I was born a woman . . .
my husband died last year,
and now I am left behind,
unprotected.

I did not do anything wrong,
did not commit a sin that would
attract such a terrible punishment . . .

I was born . . . is that it?
I was born a human . . .
I fear we have this tendency 
to turn on each other, an attraction
to great pain and punishment
for it makes us feel safe, oddly,
since this pain is not happening
to us . . . is that it?

But where is the gift of mercy,
or forgiveness?

I was born . . . is that it?		

©2007 WARD KELLEY

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