"I had many things to write, but I will not with ink and pen write unto thee..."
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LYN LIFSHIN
Emily			

with her delicate
fingers and calves,
her bag that 
says "Books, Cats,
Life is good," a 
teenager I thought,
certainly not over
30. Emily with 
no mistakes,
even in ballet, dark
eyes is, I learn
weeks after, pressed
for more, more 
by a dance teacher
till she collapses,
spasm of pain,
a child cardiologist
and surgeon, not
would be ballerina
though she is good
enough. But her
fingers dancing thru
blood, intricate
beats  in a gown in
stead of tutu, per-
forming delicate
combinations on a
tiny heart beat
so it can leap
as she can			

©2007 LYN LIFSHIN

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NEAR OCCASIONS OF SIN Review By: CHARLES P .RIES
By: Louis McKee
Cynic Press
Post Office Box 40691
Philadelphia, PA 19107 
Price: $8.00
44 Poems
79 pages
ISBN: 0-9673401-6-0


Louis McKee exemplifies the ‘philosopher poet’. From the title of his lasted 
collection of poetry, Near Occasions of Sin to the content of his poetry we 
see a writer who is not just good with word, or good with image, or selective 
about the moments in time he chooses to inspect, but a poet who is capable 
using his well honed skill with word, image and observation and elevating all 
of them with a philosopher’s mind. McKee is rich and textured in his yearning 
observations, nimble in his rich insights and wise in his conclusions. I felt 
I was not only being entertained, but learning. I was growing larger because 
of his clarity and counsel. It is not surprising that McKee has led an 
examined life as suggested in his poem, “After The Sixth Visit”: 

“That’s that one
when you lie 
back and say no- 
thing, everything 
having been said 
at least five times 
already, and she 
says well, what 
are you thinking
right now? And you 
tell her that
you’re thinking you
want to fuck her
and she says why
do you think that
is? but it is
too late, time is
gone, fifty minute
hours, seventy
dollars, and you
know when you leave
that you won’t be
back, you are better
then you have
any right to expect."

McKee is a man who wants love, who loves love; a man who adores women 
but has had more then his share of challenges getting them, keeping them, 
and loving them. He, like all lovers (and writers), is a work in progress. 
This is illustrated in his poem, “Failed Haiku”: 

“This evening I took a moment
to indulge a fantasy – you,
walking naked along a Jersey beach,
the sunlight on your lovely ass.
An ancient Japanese master
could work miracles with as much.
I am content with this.” 

And again from his poem, “The Reason I Write”: 

“I like to think she gets naked
and looks at herself in the full-length mirror;
as she does, and with a smile, slips 
into soft bliss of soapy comfort,
the almost-too-hot water uncomfortable
for just a moment but then just right.
With her wondrous hair pulled up,
she uses it as a pillow, pours a glass
of wine, then picks up a book of poems.
This is the reason they were written.
The rest of you, get your muses where you can.
I write for this woman, naked in a hot bath
under a modesty of bubbles. This is our
moment. Our poem. You find your own.”

As I read this, McKee’s thirteenth collection of poetry, I could not help but 
think of the late great small press poet Albert Huffstickler (who passed in 
2002) who, like McKee, had the ability to yearn and observe so purposefully. 
When I read poets of McKee or Huffstickler’s emotional depth I wish they 
wrote novels. I wish these short, rich, textured scenes and their meaning 
could be extended 300 more pages. Many poets write well, but few poets 
give us work as rich and profoundly meaningful as Louis McKee.
	

©2007 CHARLES P. RIES

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CAROL BORZYSKOWSKI
Caught Unaware by Joan Baez
	
"Well, I'll be damned'
twenty-five years dissolve
with her first liquid note
I am wrapped in memory
and transported back
to Colorado mountains
and life in the seventies

"Here comes your ghost again"
out the window, dust and gravel
gullied water following continental 
divide of red rocks and mud
to splash on trailers
real life view of the Rockies
not captured in post cards

"But that's not unusual" 
Your eyes, if I remember, were stone
washed gray, burnished hair always in them
always far looking, I never saw my reflection
even when my fist connected to your temple
desperate for your attention
or desperate to get out

"It's just that the moon is full"
Now I reside safely in lower altitudes
wooded bluffs out my window clearly seen
green protection and buffers
against feeling too much while
allowing my definition of self to bloom
and enjoy perspective

"And you happened to call...."
			

©2007 CAROL BORZYSKOWSKI

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