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On Plot

In my experience beginning writers are usually stronger in one of two aspects of storytelling. The first is characters and character development. This is the kind of story driven by people, their choices, and what they do with their situations. While I love this story (and in honesty, this is probably my stronger side too), I also recognize the problems it can pose.

When writing a character driven story, it’s very easy to get lost. Sometimes the character won’t have any idea what they should do next, and you won’t know what you want to happen because “The character is supposed to tell me.” Sorry, Charlie, even characters get stumped sometimes. That’s why, as the creator of this world, you owe it to your characters to be a student of the second side of storytelling, which is plot.

A plot driven story is only a little bit different, but it’s amazing how much trouble it can cause some people. The plot driven story is about events that happen in your world, and how your characters respond to them.

Consider some of your favorite fictions. Usually the powerful stories, the ones that stick with us, are the results of impossible events. Whether it is an addictive ring of power and the war its owner starts, the imbalance of the force in the universe, or the bite of a radioactive spider, events happen and then drive the characters to their destiny.

So how do you write stories like this? The answer is a simple shift in mindset. It will feel awkward at first, as most new things do, but in the end it will increase your ability to write, character OR plot, with a new outlook.

Try this exercise. Sit down to write (which you should be doing every day and preferably around the same time) and make a list of major events. You can either make them up or just record actual ones. Make them disastrous, because disaster is ALWAYS easier to write. Once you’ve done that, think of a character that this event would affect deeply. Start out with a template, like a job or a relationship, and then build from there. Decide exactly what you want to happen with your disaster in detail. If it’s a building collapsing, figure out which floor goes first, where the pipes break, and whatever affect this will have on your character. After you’ve got the stages of trouble all set on paper, then and only then, start figuring out how your character will respond to it. Then start writing. Voila, you have a plot driven story. Congratulations, and be sure to save what you write.


JH:there are issues of fiction writing that parallel issues in poetry.
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ELISAVIETTA RITCHIE
The Old Bridge, After the War			

The bridge was not badly bombed.
Corpses caught in the piles
but the span again is safe.
Bicycles, cars, even trucks 

clang across the planks. Women hurry
with buckets, children, clothes to wash.
Two mongrels who escaped the cauldron
steal down the slope to drink.

The river glistens and gives back
facades of gutted structures.
From the ruined spire, cathedral bells 
skip like stones across water.

The arches of the bridge are joined
by their watery halves
and once more on the river banks
the circles are cleated.



[published in Silver Quill (Second Prize, 1995 David Ross Memorial Poetry competition); reprinted in The Arc of the Storm, Signal Books, copyright 1998 Elisavietta Ritchie] appearing here with permission of the poet.

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JULIE KING
Coast
			
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You were just a boy at our courthouse
wedding, doing vodka shots
in the backseat with my sister, I a girl
wishing for an accident, just a dented
fender, enough damage to put
off the vows for another day.
Or year. What the hell were we thinking?
The mortgage isn't paying its monthly
coupons. The driveway doesn't empty
itself of snow. Even the cat's fur
won't grow inward to avert shedding.
When your job as a business professor
takes you to conferences to one
of the coasts, I'm happy as a pig in shit.
What the hell am I thinking?
I could tear up those coupons, toss
them on that snowy driveway, pack
the cat tightly, and haul ass
to the opposite coast in a car
with a fender shiny and smooth and perfect
enough to resist weathering of any kind.
	
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