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MARTIN JERVIS
A Peaceable Passing			
 
In my grandfather's allotment days 
In cold frames and hot earth beds, 
Grew chlorophyll green and carotene red, 
Vegetable all shapes with Mendelian genes 
And cholesterol ignorance amongst the 
Caterpillar chewings and wasp bitten apples. 
Old men in a peace of missed bullets shared 
Pipefuls of Redbreast, Four Square and 
Gallagher's Rich Dark Honeydew, a fog 
Of tobacco gas and visions of Somme, 
Passchendale, Flanders and Ypres. 

They watched the slow food rising, 
Safe distanced in a patchwork hut, 
Sitting deeply on a faded sofa, soft 
Flowered, with its guts hanging out 
And springs thrust forwards like barbs. 
Watching rising bubbles, hen soaked 
Manure, permeating unmasked nostrils, 
A Rhode Island Red fights all comers, 
Bayonet-beaked, outside his wired run. 
The slow food grew high in fresh fields, 
Strings of onions hung side by side 
With bunches of drying parsnips on dead straw 
And they dug large white King Edward's from 
Trenches that were not full of men. 


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STEVE GILLMAN
About The Author - What To Say


What To Say About The Author

What about what you shouldn't say? The 'about the author' box is not a place to brag about yourself. I once saw a resource box that listed eight different degrees and awards the author had received. I didn't click on the link to his website. All those degrees, awards and personal virtues just weren't good reasons for me to visit his website.

What should you say? Start with your name and something about yourself, to let readers know you're a real human. Keep it to one or two sentences, and try to make what you say "about the author" relevant to the topic of the article. This gives you more credibility.

Now let the readers know why they should visit your website. Getting them to click on that link and come to your website is the real purpose of the author's resource box and of the whole article. Exactly how do you do that? Try the following:

1. Let readers know what they'll find on your website.

2. Give them a reason(s) to visit.

3. Make sure the link works.

The Resource Box Tease

Try to arouse the reader's curiosity. My real estate articles with the best click-through rates are the ones that mention the photo of our $17,500 house. Are you curious about what kind of house we could buy for that? A lot of other readers are too! This is a "tease."

After your name and a sentence or two "about the author," include a tease like the example above. Isn't there something they would like to see on your site? It is even better if the tease directly relates to the topic of the article. For example, if your article was on "Six Ways To Make Money With Your Phone," you might say something like, "For more information, including another four ways to make money with your phone, visit ..."

There are other ways to get the reader to click on that link, and you should experiment. Whatever you try, though, once you have written it, try to objectively look at your about-the-author box and ask yourself, "If I had just read this article and this blurb about the author and his website, would I feel compelled to click on that link and visit the site?"


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ERIN C. HASTINGS
"Off With Her Head!"			


The first time I saw him, I knew.
His hair flowed like the Ganges River,
I became entangled in it and his
nails on my back were oh, so inviting.

He would purr in my ear and burrow
in my neck with his cold nose,
whispering riddles into my ear
until I fell asleep with my book,

not a page read.
I didn't fall into the rabbit hole,
I went looking for him. He
kept disappearing when I spoke

of litter boxes and cat beds.
I needed to know the answer
to his puzzle, I would not be
ignored. I found him

perched on a tree, engaged in
conversation with Five and Seven, 
he was always a swinger. He
saw me coming and started 

that majestic grin
but my knees didn't become weak
nor did my mind start to drift. 
I saw red and he knew

I figured him out, just a 
retired magician with only 
one trick. But I do still welcome the
pat, pat, pat of his paws on my breasts.



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