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LYN LIFSHIN
When Death Could Come Fast Enough to Leave You as the Not That Young Woman in the Coffin with Chipped Purple Nails

Do you really want to
spend your time being
a good, being a lady?
Don't you want to put
a black line thru those
calendar dates for 
things you said you'd 
do but never wanted
to? Those graduations
and dinner parties
where you hear about
the African priest so 
furious about condoms
he'd prefer Aids for
the 6th time. You don't
need to. Sip champagne
instead on the deck 
and cut the phone cord,
put on be:138 or an
exotic, hardly available
man half your age.
Wouldn't you rather
paint in lace bikinis,
even the ones a dead
love liked? You don't 
have to pole dance in
Dupont Circle or 
give up vitamins but
when the years dissolve
behind you like the
wake of a boat at 
night or small towns 
moving toward the mid
west, don't you want to
want what's wild and
light like glass in a
kaleidoscope, always
startling, gorgeous


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JOHN HORVATH JR
On Novelty in Narrative Poetry

We have lost, it seems, the powers of observation to create details necessary to describe an event. In the place of observations we find reportage all too often impossible to replicate; nor can we locate a nexus of poet and poem as both occur as one simultaneous event, the one being equal to the other so that to criticize a poem is to criticize the life of its poet.

We know little of a life that is not 'mine'. In part, what we know of the poet is divulged by the poem; this circularity is an infinitissimal portion of a life. That situation gives us little on which to stage our judgements concering plot. Plot is destroyed as recognition and reversal are lost in reportage or accidental understanding. Any collection of words strung together are equally 'a poem' due to its hints and flukes of understanding. And, immediately upon being read, that same string of words might we be no poem.

Little but bickering remains to the critical reader. It is or is not a poem. The Aristotelian worlds of A and -A (not A) allow us claim and counter claim one status or other for the words which we read. Found Art objects, crafted without intent to be poetry, become poems. Less radically, rhymes become poems. In both cases we can merely count the words and rhymes to determine a 'good' from a 'bad' poem. But, as we are wont not to do such judgments, there can be no criticism. (Equally, to the degree that we lack standards for poetry, there can be no judgement of 'poetry' and, coincidetally no judgement of people.)

Evidentiary narrative

We must garner evidence as a first act of rehabilitating the poem and the critic (which is the same as the poet and the critical reader). Immediately we may ask 'what is evidence in general' and 'what is evidence specifically'. The answer of course is 'multiple narrators', who as characters draw direct attention to inconguities among varied points of view each belonging to an individual narrator who is a character (individual persona that change as a result of the recognitions and reversals found in plot). Multiple point of view invites the critic to deconstruct and reconstruct a poem; the mind of the reader engages to follow developments in plot; the words are elevated to 'text'; reading becomes a journey. As the reader is engaged, the words gather 'significance' other than that suggested by mere rhymes, events, and reports.

The evidence that is the poem requires that events present to us a possibility of observation and its probable report. Likewise, observation and report is addressed as the source of significance rather than poet and reader. Conflict that is text allows the reader to formulate multiple 'levels' of significance. Given all the same 'baggage' that I carry, another reader, even the poet, can come to the same or like conclusions as those I have.

Evidence is that observation and reportage which draws into question the individual's sense of the significant. The reader may say, 'this poem is about a horse' (an observation of fact, a report of the words having been read) or may equally grant significance to the text 'the horse represents the strong animalistic urges of lust) - in both cases equally valid but only the second statement requires accumulation of evidence to be analyzed in the textshould be able to read in the poem what I read there.



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WENDY L. HAMMOND
Clear Water		

Idle
Calm
Clear water

Seeable, see-through

-Like me
When i wear my x-ray
In the daytime
In public

Dark blotches
Empty pockets
Bones and clouds

On exhibit like artwork
On a Paris street

All the people stop to stare
Soak their feet in me

Hear the empty echo
Of catholic organ music
Two sides of a song

The ripple of the beat

And if they pray, or feel
Or reel themselves in
Through the
Idle
Calm 
Clear water

Then art becomes artistry
And passersby
Hum 
Somewhere
Under their skin


previously published in poetryrepairs MM.12:140; copyright WENDY L. HAMMOND 2000-2007
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