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KIRBY WRIGHT
Son of Crab			

I am a sick man lying on a twin bed listening to rain. I have learned
cold showers in a solar house inhabited by crabs. Father crab sits in a
wheelchair clicking his remote. Mother crab devours mahimahi out of a
doggie bag.

I have the maid's room. The maid left years ago.

The crabs go to bed at midnight, him in his hospital bed with a view of
the red ti garden, her in the king they once shared. They would claw
one another when the salmon curtains were drawn. Now they scuttle
through the house searching for water, entertainment, dead things to
eat.

Outside, rain floods the street. My skin hardens as I write

--- ABOUT KIRBY WRIGHT ---
Kirby has been nominated for two Pushcart Prizes and is a past recipient of the Ann Fields Poetry Prize, the Academy of American Poets Award, the Browning Society Award for Dramatic Monologue, and Arts Council Silicon Valley Fellowships in Poetry and The Novel. BEFORE the CITY, Kirby's first book of poetry, has just been published by Lemon Shark Press

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STEVE GILLMAN
Systematic Poetry Techniques

Do you ever stare at the paper, waiting for poetic inspiration? Well, you can stop waiting and start using systematic techniques for creating poetry. If it seems too mechanical or artificial at first, don't worry. The point is just to get you writing, because creativity is stimulated by work.

When You Have A Poem In Mind

If you have your topic, ask yourself why it's important then write down your answer. How do you feel about it? Write down those feelings. Write a line or a scene that exemplifies what you are trying to point out. Then, start rearranging the words into a poem.

The main thing is to do anything other than waiting to stimulate your creativity. Sometimes poems can come from a simple description. Write down a description of an event, and then find a way to form it into something more succinct and poetic.

When You Need Ideas For Poems

1. Look around and write down what you see.

2. Write about anything that you felt today.

3. Ask anyone for a topic and start writing.

4. Use random words, one per line, to create a verse.

Poets can break through the worst writers-block, by simply using any "tricks" available to start writing poems. Try it.

Even very artificial, or "mechanical" techniques will get your creativity flowing. You'll find more of these poetic techniques in part two.


--- ABOUT---
STEVE GILLMAN has been playing with poetry for thirty years. He and his wife Ana created the game "Deal-A-Poem," which can be accessed for free at: http://www.dealapoem.com

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BISHOP FALLON
Waterfall			

Peek through the haze, I realize 
Where I am,
here, now...
The water
falls gently, 
Ending long
journey.
Once a calm
puddle
Wrenched from
comfortable home
Forward,
picking up speed
To plung to
depths unrealized
To the rocks
below.
Nature throws
itself around
The green
feeling; comfortable
Stars in the
sky.

And the rose
speaks, 
Amidst the
resplendant sight,
Of past and
present 
And future, 
Of pain
unbearable 
And broken
wings mending.
What secrets
lie hidden here? 
What force
exists in wait? 
What
motivation moves waters
From
comfortable home
To depths
unrealized 
To the rocks
below...

And like the
waterfall, I speak
Pouring out
everything 
Of past and
present 
And future, 
Ripped from comfortable
home 
To worlds
unrealized 
To the fall
again, 
Gently pick up
speed 
And crash into
a thousand pieces 
To the rocks
below...

Opposites, yet

Two of a kind,
we were.
Tattered and
beaten, 
Unforgettable
loss, 
And only time
to pave the way 
Under the
tapestry of stars
In the glow of
passing planes 
Outlined by
the solitary moon.

Two hearts,
reviving 
Side by side,
to the whisper

Of falling
rain.

 

copyright 1998, from Summation, by Bishop Fallon; reprinted from poetryREpairs MM.02

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