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GYUKICS GABOR
Chrysalis			

A diabolically consolidated wasp's nest with a
Woman as its resilient keeper was found in the
Same woman's vertebrae during autopsy, 
The coroner seemed bathetic as he turgidly 
Drew his initials on the side of the nest
In the rancid spine line to ensure his first right
To this bouncing discovery.

The woman's puffed up face showed aversion
Regarding the intrusion into her cagey body, 
She was inclined to diminish the coroner's derogatory
Invasion for she had been nurturing these
Ferocious inhabitants of her nest with
Complimentary attention, with
Utter persuasion to let them maintain their 
Own proliferation by overlooking
Flowers in dewy cemeteries,
Jiving tactile grave diggers and as the primary goal of existence.

Now, at present the woman's bony shell
Is laid out in the morgue, with the 
Abandoned nest inside her waiting for the
Final taxidermy.
--- copyright GYUKICS GABOR

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Producing a Well-Structured Essay

A good essay is essentially characterized by good coherence and structure. It should consist of an introduction, a body and a conclusion united by a common thesis statement.

An introduction needs to contain several sentences describing the scope and features of the problem discussed. Then a thesis statement should follow. It should be no more than one sentence and describe in a nutshell your major findings after research on a given topic. For example: "Discrimination of women in the workplace is manifested not only in the process of hiring but in work conditions and remuneration as well."

A body of the essay serves to develop the thesis statement in the introduction. If you are assigned a five-paragraph essay it should be three paragraphs. In all other cases, a body part should comprise no less than 80 per cent of the whole essay. This is a part where you provide arguments and examples to support your main idea. You should start with strong arguments, continue with arguments of medium strength and finish with very strong ones so that your essay is persuasive enough. Do not forget to reference facts and figures you provide.

A conclusion is the last part of the essay. It restates the thesis statement and lists the main conclusions which can be drawn from arguments in the body. However, the thesis statement should not simply be rewritten; the idea needs to be enriched and confirmed with the results from your findings.

These may sound like basic rules but in fact they are a solid ground for producing a good essay. No matter how original your ideas are and how exclusive the information you have obtained is, a poor structure will drastically lower the chances of your essay's appreciation.
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KIM WELLIVER
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"Don't get shirty with me!" 
I almost bray when he says it,
tangle my tongue around the sound,
screw my lips tight 
as he mouths words
incongruous
as the black & white celluloids,
and plugged nickels 
from a decades dead boyhood.

"Don't get shirty with me!"
as though he can parse
dignity from grandevity; 
puddled naked in his bathchair,
seeking some indelible nobility
from wattled neck-skin
scrawny shank's
mosaic of liver spots.

I lower him,
loose as a crumpled bag,
into vapor and steaming water.
Pink the milk-pallor of his
sunken chest, the slack belly
lapped over buttresses
of pelvic bones,
his flaccid penis
in its sparse nest.

Flares of a man twenty years gone
spark in hard blue eyes,
pulse his coda
between lashless lid-blinks.

His mouth works dry white phlegm,
eats the gristle of age,
the abasement of diapers 
& bathchairs, croaking
naked against my starched breast

"Don't you get shirty with me!"
I mumble, "No sir,”
soap his spine.

--- copyright KIM WELLIVER. previously published on poetryREpairs 02.01:003



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