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Without fanfare, she said, "Give it to me." 
Then the opium vanished in one flush. 
Vexed, he asked, "Why couldn't you let it be?" 
Their friend the playwright laughed hard and said, "Hush!"

Then Tennessee's drugs vanished in one flush. 
"Come with me, Paul, to see our leg of lamb." 
Their friend the playwright laughed hard and said, "Hush!" 
"Tennessee paid the butcher in dirhams."

"Come with me, Paul, to see our leg our lamb.
Afterwards let's watch the blue people dance. 
Tennessee paid the butcher in dirhams." 
Fire, earth, water, wind — a blessed trance.

"Afterwards let's watch the blue people dance." 
Vexed, he asked, "Why couldn't you let it be?" 
Fire, earth, water, wind — a blessed trance. 
Sans fanfare, she said, "He gave it to me."
--- copyright KARREN LaLONDE ALENIER

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All About LYN LIFSHIN's ALL ABOUT ME

LYN LIFSHIN's poem series, ALL ABOUT ME, is all about transitions. How the 'real world' as it is observed enters the world of sleep, the world wrought in dreams. And, LIFSHIN's poems are equally ALL ABOUT how a dream world - one derived from the psyche = changes the rational world. It is a subject that is but is not the confessional poem.

Long ago, far away is the unspoken foundation for confessional poetry. Confessional poetry requires both a person (persona) and personal recollection. The place of the poem (it's setting) must be away from the poet so as to avoid the reader being unaware of what is being written. The poem creates 'far away' through diction/dialect and distance/details. WIthout these two-part oppositions - setting and voice - there can be no 'long ago' because long ago is also created from details. "Naked Lunch' written with the character dealing with, say, terrorism, computers, 747s, and a love interest would ring inauthentic. As it is important for the reader to be far away and longer ago, it is equally important that setting and voice reside far away and long ago in respect to the poet.

A novice will often change the dynamic: the confessional becomes 'my experience' validated by 'writing' it down. This often creates either voice without details or details without voice. If too close to the reader, an experience is but another opinion. Too close to the poet , the experience cannot be re-created only reported. The idea of reportage as poetry work only if and when the writer has extraordinary lived experience, and even then we verge on private autobiography: what I thought when X happened (the poet or reader may ascribe whatever is desirable).

In the confessional poem is the world as the poet observed it; the world that insinuates itself into the psyche; the world of the poem, and the world in a poem as the persona experiences (which is another form of the world as the poet observed). It is a mongrelized version of several worlds through which we pass and the worlds which pass through us. We do not consciously make the poem into reality nor do we consciously absorb the surrounding world. In a very real sense, the confessionaql is not about someone or something. Rather, it must seem to be about someone and some thing.

LYN LIFSHIN creates this seeming by ending her poem series at its beginning, thus she encoourages her readers to return to the poems with another set of expectations. What happens when poems read as ALL ABOUT ME (LYN LIFSHIN) are read as ALL ABOUT ME (a fifteen year old girl at the center of her universe) is another transformation which is LIFSHI*N's subject matter.

Consider, for example, these lines from 'Hearing Something About 'the BOSTON PHOENIX on Air':
The waif-
like girl, the slightly
heavy woman in
black coaxing me to
come with her.

Is this a fifteen-year-old girl being picked up as if it were after school. Or, does the poem challenge its readers (in good academic style) to contemplate how personal events parallel cultural spectacles (or one might reverse it to be about how spectacle effects the personal). Here is also a woman who reads to us her view of an event and how the rational world (of the press) describes her highly personal experience. Were it prose or prosaic we might ask, which is the 'right' or 'correct' reading. They are all, and they are each the subject matter of LIFSHIN's poem series.

In her poem 'Old Boy Friends', LYN LIFSHIN details ulterior motives, and the reality behind their inability to visit: an 'obituary" is both 'a jolt' and 'Almost a relief'. The ambiguous status of the 'old boy friends' is also a kind of withholding a truth about the obituary being, in fact, a relief. LIFSHIN keeps the reader from knowing by distancing the reader: from ME, the poet, to it, the MY cat, from cat to MY mother's, to a frind's car, and the friend is MOTHER's.
My first Abyssinian
cat in my mother's
friend's car.

One notes also the deminuation of details: Abyssinian cat to to an unidentified car and its weakly identified 'friend'. A poet knows exactly where to place the truth. The poem, like a Brochure, leaves some details totally unspoken, 'like a Christmas card/ of the Happy Family before/ news of any truth leaks out'. In her 'Indigo' poem, the poet/persona knows when too much detail the academic one upmanship of knowing more - 'digresses' from meaning. And, likewise, too little imformation - "someone was looking for a way to smooth the /waves" (in 'Terra Flambe') leaves the reader focused on that thing (the wave). It's Hokusai's and it is a background (the Indian Ocean Tsunami) yet it may also be the machine-created thing at the water park. the wave cultural, historical, or artificial.

The answer is 'YES'. The confessional is about all these things. And, the answer is 'NO.' The confessional is about none of these things. LYN LIFSHIN's genius is in making her 'ME' into the reader's 'MINE'.

--- copyright JOHN HORVATH Jr

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Reverse Prayers

The poem does not originate with the poet, but rather, the poet is the medium through which the poem passes from a higher sphere to the world.
- Plato paraphrasing Socrates



Here in the farmlands of Indiana and, for that matter, in the corridors of my employer -- a large corporation where we sell pre-computer hardware, as in hammers and post hole diggers -- poetry is not scorned as once I feared. Instead it is tenuously respected, by both farmers and executives, as one might respect a proctoscope -- they're certain it performs some valued function, but they'd rather not get too close to the topic.

I accidentally made a small fortune in the hardware business. I call it accidental because no one who knows me would ever ask me to fix a screen door since I am inept at actually handling hardware. Still, they would most likely come to me first if they were ever in need of a poem, although this has yet to happen. And where hardware has almost nothing in common with poetry, it can provide a starting point.

Poems come to be born, like the cotton gin came to Eli, as seminal gifts emanating from outside the conscious. Any inventor will tell you about the value of intuition or the flash of insight bestowed while one stands in the shower.

For myself I call poems reverse prayers, in that real prayers go forth from one who beseeches outward to the Great Beyond; poems, on the other hand, emanate from the Great Beyond back into the receptor poet.

Quite proud of this term, reverse prayers, I walked around satiated for many months until I read in a Richard Wilbur essay that Emily called them bulletins from Immortality. This gave me pause. I didn't know if I had stepped on the power-rail of poetic luck or not.

Later I learned Jack Spicer used to refer to poets as little radio receivers. No doubt in the future some essayist will think to call us ion beam receptacles.

There's that old joke about the redneck who puzzled over a thermos bottle. He pondered how you can put coffee into it, and later the coffee comes out hot. Or you could put soda pop into it, and later the soda comes out cold. Mystified he asks, “How do it know?”

Poems are like those rare moments at a crowded seashore when, by capricious timing, there are no waves breaking and the brief silence alerts everyone to the succinct importance of introspection. Quickly the waves continue.

The best stance for a poet to learn -- like a bizarre literary bio-feedback, void of conscious thought -- is the poetic equivalent of 'how do it know?' The best lines of the poem sneak between the foliations of the unsuspecting mind. One truly does not need to know them at the moment of birth; one simply needs to be able to recognize them later, on the re-write.

Such poetic success, I should point out, is the opposite of business success, which depends so much upon conscious endeavors and unshakeable wills. And where many executives might profit from increased reliance on the ability to intuit, no poet is going to benefit by trying harder and harder. When poets try harder, they quickly become afflicted by writer's block.

Quoting Stephen Dobyns quoting Rainer Maria Rilke, “Ideally, [an artist] should be unconscious of his insights . . . all his progress should enter so swiftly into the work that he is unable to recognize them in the moment of transition.”

Yet not all poets see these little gifts as benevolent. Some go on to give them spiritual bodies with devilish characters, so throughout poetry we find the duende or dybbuk or recalcitrant muse disquieting the minds of poets. These particular spirits are less like radio signals, and more like waves of dyspepsia.

Lorca once wrote, “The duende does not come at all unless he sees that death is possible.” Edward Hirsch pivots from that to “Duende, then, means something like artistic inspiration in the presence of death.” Or perhaps one could say sometimes these tricksters spring from the dichotomy between messiah and predestination.

Hirsch again, this time on Rilke: “There are in truth any number of such uncanny moments in Rilke's poems when the mind seems to give way before an incomprehensible mystery and, out of a long foreground, the lines on the poem seem to be forming themselves, as if dictated by a force from without that is also somehow a voice within.”

Lorca says, “It is a struggle, not a thought.” But I have no fight with it, and secretly hope these tricksters do not exist for me. I have never been so afflicted. Knock on wood for me. Instead of fighting, I usually try to achieve a reverent clearing of my mind. “Don't think,” I caution myself . . . then I simply wait to see what comes on in. So far it has worked pretty well, including the middle of this paragraph. At the moment I'm on a jet heading for Dallas. By the way, writing always seems to flow well for me at thirty-thousand feet.

Time for Emerson to weigh in. “For poetry was all written before time was,” the greatest essayist points out. And, “ . . . but the poet knows well that it is not his; that it is as strange and beautiful to him as to you.” It would lead one to believe -- indeed all the above leads one to believe -- that there's a celestial reservoir, something like a personal cistern, floating above the heads of the elected ones.

I can see the choice of the word cistern has minimized the topic. Perhaps I'm writing my own heresy when I minimize, for I have always been a believer and have frequently stated in the past that one does not select poetry, poetry selects you. I do strongly believe that one's childhood grants the evidence. Elisha Porat once put it, “Artists are born with a different framework for their soul . . . perhaps some flaw . . . as alluring beauty sometimes comes from differing from the norm.”

Whenever I tend toward the metaphysical, I self-correct, then cast an aspersion or two on the topic. I drag myself back from the mystical towers of my most cherished fantasy. Yet how do it know? Just where do these seminal nuggets come from?

All of these quoted poets have experienced the motion beyond intuition, the achievement of the sense that allows one to poetically intuit, and all have felt the actual words and phrases come rolling in so fluidly. All of these poets have accepted the presence of poetic thought somewhere beyond their own conscious. Indeed I have never known a poet who does not get a little wistful when discussing these matters, and have never, never, heard a poet brag, “Hey, I just make it up as I go, man.”

So where do I come down on the topic? Are they reverse prayers or not?

Yes, they are reverse prayers. I think our souls entertain the stuff of the poem. I think the soul can intuit back to the conscious. I don't think these poems come bubbling up from the unconscious, as the more pragmatic of us would have it, but rather I can feel, or I can intuit, these little revelations emanate from the very soul, the soul who already has one foot planted solidly in death (a nod to SeÔor Lorca) or, if you will, the afterlife. Of course, I would very much like to prove it . . . but I can't.

Instead, I will say this: even though I think the soul entertains the stuff of poetry, I do not, however, believe the process is metaphysical. Indeed, I think it will be found to be physical.

To paraphrase Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, we readily believe that our arms are in the physical world, that our skin and bones are physical, and that our very brain is physical, but we quickly balk at believing that our souls are physical. Most of us would say, “No, no, our souls must be ephemeral, wiffy, spiritual.” But why? Perhaps our souls are physical, too. Who would say their consciousness is not a part of nature? To quote the good Jesuit directly: “To think we must eat.” and “In the last analysis, somehow or other, there must be a single energy operating in the world. And the first idea that occurs to us is that the 'soul' must be as it were a focal point of transformation at which, from all points of nature, the forces of bodies converge, to become interiorised and sublimated in beauty and truth.”

Throughout the past five thousand years of the written word, it is clear that as science progresses and explains more of the physical world, the metaphysical world has retreated from what it once termed concrete truths (for example, Adam and Eve) to more allegorical truths (the Big Bang was perhaps instigated by God).

Maybe science has not yet invented a strong enough microscope or telescope to discern the human soul. Yet I have a great faith in the future of science. And in the end I believe we will discover that it is indeed physical not metaphysical. Although I do not expect this to happen tomorrow, or for that matter, within the next hundred generations. In the meantime, I recommend reverse prayers to you. They're not quite as scientific as a microscope, but they're all the evidence we have right now.


--- copyright WARD KELLEY. "Reverse Prayers" was previously published onpoetryREpairs 02.01:009

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